Wednesday, September 9, 2009
Resturant
Last night my husband took me to Red Lobster. Why to Red Lobster you ask, because I was having one of my very strange pregnancy cravings for crab legs. Let me tell you those crab legs were the best I had ever eaten. Most likely because I was craving them but they were still so delicious. We had a blast they sat us next to this very strange couple who talked nothing else of this random guy that hit on the girlfriend. They even asked they waitress for her opinion. It was a delicious and entertaining evening.
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I know all about the pregnancy cravings, my wife is due in January. She was craving Red Lobster 2 weeks ago too. There hasn't been anything too crazy yet!
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• Several run-on sentences that should have been broken up into shorter ones.
- Why go to Red Lobster, you ask? Because I was having ...
- We had a blast. They sat us next to...
- Let me tell you: those crab legs were the best...
• Sentence fragment: Most likely because...
• Wrong word used: they in place of the
My boyfriend took me to Red Lobster last week too! That place is so good, I love their crab legs.
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