Saturday, September 12, 2009
Protesters
The largest protest against Obama since he took office. The lawn of the white house was filled with people protesting the issue of health care and grew to a complete dissatisfaction of government. People are not only unhappy with the new health care idea but with almost everything Obama has or has not done.
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Wow. I've been hearing tidbits of information about this health care reform issue. It is a really big concern. I know a lot of conservatives are very angered about it, but it seems there is a good number of liberals as well who are in opposition to it. It's really sad to see our dear country the way it is now. No one seems to remember that we are called the "UNITED States" for a reason.
Grade: 9/10
Mistakes:
• The first sentence is incomplete. It lacks a verb. The largest protest what? was held?
• White House should be capitalized.
*Note: This (People are not only unhappy with the new health care idea but with almost everything Obama has or has not done.) doesn't sound like a news story. It is very opinionated. Where did you find this news story? Please include the source.
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