Monday, October 19, 2009
Son charged with stabbing father to death in Stillwater
Gregory Janisch's bipolar son stabbed him to death. David Joseph Janisch was charged with two accounts of second degree murder. There is no doubt David Janisch is the murderer because just before Mr. Janisch died the police asked who did this he said, "My son,he's bipolar." There is still no motive attributed and the police are still piecing the case together. -Star Tribune, Tim Harlow-
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3 comments:
This is an interesting, sad article. I actually almost did this one myself!
Good job!
This is a sad story, but it is also interesting. I like how you establish the story right away in the lead. The quote is very effective.
Grade: 8.5/10
Mistakes:
• You don't mention when this happened
• Don't use Mr. in a news story. In instances where you have more than one person with the same last time, refer to the person by the initial of his first name and last name. Ex. G. Janisch and D. Janisch
• Who said? Who is he?
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