Monday, October 12, 2009
Eileen Fisher’s Shifting Silhouette
Eileen Fisher is a designer that is trying to appeal to the younger generation because in the new off Broadway show, “Love, Loss, and What I Wore,” a character says, “When you start wearing Eileen Fisher, you might as well say, ‘I give up.’” She has changed her designs subtly by adding tighter tank tops and leggings. Eileen Fisher is defiantly not going poor any time soon she just simply didn’t want to be known as blah. -NY Times, by RUTH LA FERLA-
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I liked your summary of the article about Eileen Fisher from The New York Times, probably my favorite national newspaper. It was concise. I also noticed a sassy style that gave this mini brief some pizazz. Although I'm a poor college student unable to afford Eileen Fisher's clothes, I really like them.
Grade: 9/10
Mistakes:
• Definitely is misspelled
• Run-on sentence should be divided into two: Eileen Fisher is defiantly not going poor any time soon she just simply didn’t want to be known as blah.
NOTE: The first sentence is too long and should be divided up to make it easier for the reader to understand.
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